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Harold Ember's avatar

This is a very interesting world and story. And is there any more to this world?

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Derek James Kritzberg's avatar

Thank you for the read and the compliment!

In-universe all my stories labeled Deupawn happen in the same galaxy and are prequels to my unpublished book Deupawn: Burning Angels. Deupawn: The Reaper's Audit happens on the same world centuries after this one. Deupawn: An Angel's Descent mentions Jann, though his name is redacted. I have an ongoing serial Deupawn: Chains of a Demigod that that will reveal its connections to this world soon (part 5 comes Friday).

After I finish the serial I plan to write another story about Jann Sorenson or something else on Cabal Prime.

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Ken W.'s avatar

I felt a bit sad that the majority of the human civilization had converted to near-immortal bodies and were basically doing the same mistakes that humanity did. Its sad, but it makes sense. The worldbuilding was really good, and I liked it a lot. T

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James Kenwood's avatar

Please sir, may we have MORE?

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Derek James Kritzberg's avatar

You may. Thanks for reading!

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